On looking at my paper, there are many things I am going to change. I didn't explain as much as I could have about the details in the article. I think I was so concerned about getting the TS, CD, etc. in there that I left other important details out.
I did somewhat put my opinion in there but I think that could have been done better. I didn't say at all what I thought of the author's opinion of the original text so I need to add that in. Many of my key points need more support. There was not enough details in the paper to support those points. My punctuation and grammar seemed to be good but I needed to use more descriptive words. I always forget not to use contractions so I am changing that. Also, as hard as it is not to have is, was, were, are words in there I think it will sound much more detailed in the end. My summary needs some work too. As hard as it was receiving a 36/50, it definitely drives me to get it up.
Overall, I think the paper was ok but it will get much better, I promise!!!!
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This IS what this class is for, Kendra. Do not be discouraged. The grade will go up and the rewriting will be "good" for you! (was that "Mom-like?")
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